Thursday, 13 April 2017

Narrative Writing) Harley Quinn Story

            Narrative Writing
  1. Harley Quinn is a Fighter that is on suicide squad she is a top high actor
  2. Describe: Harley Quinn has blue,Red Hair harf side hairstyle, Also Harley Quinn is tall she wears leggings with shorts over the top. Harley Quinn shoes are black and white high shoes, All of her clothes are red and blue because that's her favorite color.

Once upon time there was a girl called Harley Quinn she lived in a scary scary house. All Harley Quinn did was just played outside. Harley Quinn went outside and meet some girls playing. So she ask them if they would like to play hiding go seek. They said yes sure I would like to play with you. So Harley Quinn said to them that she would be in. So she covered her eyes and counted to 10 seconds. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ready or not here I come. I walked all the way to find my new friends I looked everywhere around the house but not inside the house. I went to go open the door to look for them in my house.
All I could hear was my new friends screaming, I said what are all of you doing in here? Hahaha All I could see was a my new friends chasing a little tiny rat around my house. So that's what you call Harley Quinn. So all the girls and her, all made friends and a happily ever after the end.


  1. Kia Ora Aliyah, I'm Jessie from Totara 2 in Grey Main School,
    I think that this was an interesting take on Harley Quinn's back-story. I like the part at the end about the mouse. Something that you should work on is your spelling and the fact that half way through the story you became Harley instead of her being in third person. I love describing characters and inanimate objects it can sometimes be challenging.
    Keep up the awesome work!

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  3. Kia ora Jessie, Thanks for the feedback I hope you comment more between my blog.