Friday, 17 February 2017

That Was Summer By Aliyah

Date: 7/2/20171    
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( Remember)
Standing in the hot sun?
Your hair waving in front of your face.
Your bursting clothes swaying to side to side.
Your sticky hair attaching to your sweating neck
Standing in the hot sun.
Your body bursting hot from standing in the sun.
Your Shoes Bursting  like hot lava.

That was my Summer
I was learning to write a  interesting descriptive piece of summer writing. I was learning how to use interesting verbs in our own piece of writing. I think I can improve next time by putting new nouns in my writing.  I think I did well at describing standing in the hot sun. I enjoyed discovering  new adjectives.

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